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Wednesday, January 7, 2009

two morning haiku

frosty morning - 
glancing between
the wilted pansy and me


monday morning - 
heavy skies press me deep
into my pillow

8 comments:

John McDonald said...

delightful
john

Rachel Green said...

Lovely double!

Reihaisha said...

love the second one

Area 17 said...

Very enjoyable!

all my best,

Alan
With Words

Ashi said...

Nice haiku' Jem, the last one nearly got me too this morning ;)

Crafty Green Poet said...

yes I like both, and can really relate to the second, specially the first Monday after New Year...

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

the 2nd one is wonderful!

diana l. said...

Boy, can I relate to being pressed into a pillow. Wonderful wording!