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Saturday, January 17, 2009

in a garden...

quick brown birds
chirp and frrip
through the barren cherry tree

sunlight glides
and a white cap sparkles
on the last red apple

6 comments:

Area 17 said...

Love them.

I particularly adore the second haiku.


all my best,

Alan
With Words
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Crafty Green Poet said...

frrip is just a wonderful word...

John McDonald said...

nice work Gwilym
john

diana l. said...

I really love "frrip".

Gwil W said...

Thanks everybody!

Ram Krishna Singh said...

I liked the second haiku more.
And, the use of 'frrip' is very suggestive.

--R K