quick brown birds
chirp and frrip
through the barren cherry tree
sunlight glides
and a white cap sparkles
on the last red apple
Saturday, January 17, 2009
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Posted by Gwil W at 6:40 AM
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Winter Haiku 2008/2009
quick brown birds
chirp and frrip
through the barren cherry tree
sunlight glides
and a white cap sparkles
on the last red apple
Posted by Gwil W at 6:40 AM
6 comments:
Love them.
I particularly adore the second haiku.
all my best,
Alan
With Words
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frrip is just a wonderful word...
nice work Gwilym
john
I really love "frrip".
Thanks everybody!
I liked the second haiku more.
And, the use of 'frrip' is very suggestive.
--R K
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