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Saturday, January 10, 2009

first snow -
the rustling of his steps
to the bus stop

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première neige -
le crissement de ses pas
vers l'arrêt de bus

Posted by Damien Gabriels at 12:40 AM  

2 comments:

Gwil W said...

le crissement de ses pas

has wonderful crispy frosty noise to it, most appropriate

January 11, 2009 at 5:45 AM  
Area 17 said...

I love sound being added to a haiku! ;-)

all my best,

Alan
With Words
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January 12, 2009 at 9:10 AM  

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