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Saturday, January 31, 2009

old friends leaving -
snow falls
fills their footprints

4 comments:

diana l. said...

Beautiful and sad.

Crafty Green Poet said...

very sad

Möme said...

Nicely coined sense of separation and love.

Area 17 said...

I agree with the comments! ;-)

You could consider a further edit:

old friends leaving -
snowfall
fills their footprints

old friends leaving snow fills their footprints

old friends leaving -
snow fills
their footprints


A wonderfully poignant haiku.

Alan