Cold winds pluck at skin,
teasing hair from scarves and the
feeling from old bones.
Friday, January 16, 2009
Posted by Rachel Green at 1:27 AM
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Winter Haiku 2008/2009
A little bit about Winter Haiku 2008/2009
To be invited to this blog or to continue being a contributor, send your:your email addressyour nom de plumea link to your blog or websiteto Steve at songofnovember@gmail.com
If you participated in the previous seasonal blog, and all the information is the same, just let Steve know that fact.If you don't receive an invitation, check your TRASH or BULK or SPAM mailbox, in case the invitation ended up in those folders.You will need to register with Blogger in order to contribute to the blog. You can register with your email address; you don't need to get a gmail address.
RULESThis blog is open to all haiku poets! Please submit your FAMILY-FRIENDLY haiku, senryu, tanka, haiga, or haibun.You can also submit photos or drawings to enhance our experience of reading your one-breath thoughts!Artwork or photographs should be the original work of the contributor. If not, it is the contributor's responsibility to ensure that they have permission to use the work.ALL POSTS WILL BE BOLD AND IN (you decide the color). If you decide to use another color, please make sure that your text doesn't disappear into the background.The only requirement for posting is that there should be an WINTER theme.Postings/day: 3 maximum.
If you participated in the previous seasonal blog, and all the information is the same, just let Steve know that fact.If you don't receive an invitation, check your TRASH or BULK or SPAM mailbox, in case the invitation ended up in those folders.You will need to register with Blogger in order to contribute to the blog. You can register with your email address; you don't need to get a gmail address.
RULESThis blog is open to all haiku poets! Please submit your FAMILY-FRIENDLY haiku, senryu, tanka, haiga, or haibun.You can also submit photos or drawings to enhance our experience of reading your one-breath thoughts!Artwork or photographs should be the original work of the contributor. If not, it is the contributor's responsibility to ensure that they have permission to use the work.ALL POSTS WILL BE BOLD AND IN (you decide the color). If you decide to use another color, please make sure that your text doesn't disappear into the background.The only requirement for posting is that there should be an WINTER theme.Postings/day: 3 maximum.
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January
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- first snow -the mailman's cyclewith new tires***pr...
- Chill clouds gatheringthe winds about them like as...
- old friends leaving -snow fallsfills their footpr...
- up the frozen hillwindows' welcoming glowwaterfall...
- today's top to-doreminding male coworkersV-Day in ...
- Pat is the Spring 09 Administrator
- Metaxa
- glass tinkle branchletstimpani deep step crunch ut...
- stirs the sleeping owl -gangly creatures with stra...
- grey pig wrinkles red nose delves in heap of snow
- The heart of winter -stopped? No, coveredin snow l...
- day after stormbrown grass turning greenin the mel...
- pristine slice of icetossed aside to clear a pathf...
- well-polished blanketssculpted by a master handbri...
- For Debia sliver of lightslices throughthe icy lan...
- appeal to heavenshriek over the winter wind –sprin...
- sharp scrapes -my neighbour's shovel through silen...
- For Liezlwinter chillshe just receives her layoff ...
- icy morningcar cleaning race with neighborsalt ski...
- hunger-haunted wolvesgray house-cat trapped in thi...
- Sunshine blares on snow,Trumpets shadows to the ba...
- salvation danglesfrom the new hole in the skya glo...
- snowy morningonly intrusion on lawnmail carrier's ...
- New Administrator Needed Soon
- Winter garden
- weeee! running, skiddingdown, pull, grunt, slip-in...
- in the sleet a small bird callsand takes a sunflow...
- light frost on windowmomentarily blurred worldher ...
- footprints from her houseenduring craters dug deep...
- crackling fire -music of life, call of death -crac...
- first lightflock of birdsrise to meet the day
- notes floating -Holy Cross Marching Bandpracticing...
- lunar new year--the baby wavesher dumpling fists
- quickening currentsnowmelt swells the wide riverun...
- dry snow-covered plainwind-swept drifts shift ceas...
- haiku for zen speug's john mac...
- inauguration--the new mom wiping tearswith a burp ...
- weekend commutechildren playing kickballdog joins ...
- ice lace on windowgray Tabby breathes most warm mi...
- day rise -I slowly peela clementine***lever du jou...
- found...
- new arrivalsto this winter worldas i take my leave
- morning commutecrows light on frozen runoffstray c...
- singular snowflakefloating falling fimbrialdelicat...
- crisp morning -white sails onblue lake
- bitter wind--all the sweetness capturedin this cle...
- chilly night chorefinding air pump to fix flatand ...
- Lichen Winter Trees
- in the street...
- hunger moon--the deer's neck stretched to reachthe...
- stoop flower potpansies bushierafter melting snow
- Nothing
- sporting a snow cap:child-painted bright blue bird...
- through the windowsnow blanketing the lawnsand emp...
- Eden: Pre-Dawn
- in the crystallined snowthe first primrose -pale a...
- office door ajar -waiting for the farm catto find ...
- Having Lunch
- first snowfall -each branch ladenwith a ghostly one
- arrivals
- tramp -steam from his soupwarming his face
- Winter Sun
- those vanished yearsthat he could see but not touc...
- Wrong again...
- waking in the cold -the spider's presence betrayed...
- weekend chorestwo sips of coffee beforetaking out ...
- On The Black Mountain
- in a garden...
- Shrouded in fogthe lone pomegranatein the courtyar...
- Around falling leavesa lone dreaming flower--mid-J...
- The half moonon her neck reminds of lovebefore dep...
- flood waters crest--a coffin bobsto the surface
- "urgent" in redon the envelope -his greeting card*...
- early commute-extra hot Americanofor a hand warmer
- In the Harbor
- in the window...
- once, she had such wings!thermals lifting into lig...
- Cold winds pluck at skin,teasing hair from scarves...
- today's mail-winter sales circulars andflower cata...
- To Princeton
- singing againher favorite lullabye--evensong
- Letting Her Sleep In
- morning...
- wintry nightwalking to the front doorthe lawn crac...
- leading edge of steelcharcoal cloud roof marches i...
- sunset breaks dark clouds -tart band of orange rin...
- winter morning -two old friendssnow in our hair
- Brave New World
- frosty cobbles -in the hay filled stablethe year's...
- Through winter mistsall life appears to fade-only ...
- the taut plunkof a cello string breaking--snowmelt
- blinking the tears backboxing up Yuki's* toysthat ...
- ferrying nightfrom dusk to dawnwinter moon
- Five from Belle Isle Marsh, Slack-tide, January
- thawing out...
- trees shudderin the winter wind-loneliness
- basement surprise-on overwintering shrubsmall gree...
- dawn - light runsthrough the brancheslighting...
- this snowflake:if only my worldwas fashioned so
- I'm down for the count
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3 comments:
These haikus are starting to make me want to stay inside.
Painfully well done!
YES. It's got the right degree of onomatopoeia, alliteration and assonance without forcing them. It draws the viewer in and makes the viewer feel what you're trying to say. You take the right 1 cent words and arrange simple bricks to make a well-designed wall, rather than just assembling a collection of 50 cent words and leaving the viewer with a pile of expensive bricks. Yes. And I ESPECIALLY like that you reference each body part individually, independently, as if a separate entity. That invites a clearer, closer focus. I think this is the best one I've seen so far.
This one does all that should be asked of it.
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