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Monday, January 5, 2009

Snowflakes quietly float
settling piece by piece
changing the world

6 comments:

John McDonald said...

excellent
john

Area 17 said...

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This is gorgeous!

I don't think you need the first adverb and verb as it is so strong.

Snowflakes
settling piece by piece
changing the world


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Ashi said...

I see what you mean Alan - I wonder whether I also could do this

Snowflakes
piece by piece
changing the world

Area 17 said...

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Even better! ;-)

I absolutely love snow, and I relate so strongly to this haiku.

I took the Eurostar train from St Pancras through the Italian Alps and there's something about snow 'transforming' the man-made structures.

all my best,

Alan
With Words

diana l. said...

lovely!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

This is so lovely and peaceful. Would that snowflakes could change this world. Beautiful.

love-bd