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Wednesday, January 14, 2009


leading edge of steel
charcoal cloud roof marches in
closing off the sky

4 comments:

Pat Trombly said...

Interesting imagery. Rogers Centre?

diana l. said...

Thank you. I'm not exactly sure where Rogers Centre is located. This one could have arisen from any place where an expanse of sky is typically visible.

I'm wondering now if my choice of words may have been confusing...

Pat Trombly said...

No I like it a lot - the idea of a thick cloud-cover as making the sky smaller is something that I've noticed but never written about myself. This was very nice.

diana l. said...

Thank you, Pat.