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Saturday, January 3, 2009

brisk morning
my breath follows me
to the car

4 comments:

John McDonald said...

enjoyed happy new year
john

diana l. said...

I'm there.

Area 17 said...

Good "haiku" economy of words, and very 'show' rather than "tell".

Excellent haiku!

Shelley said...

Nice feeling of both the cold and the speaker's hurry... liked it!