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Thursday, January 29, 2009

sharp scrapes -
my neighbour's shovel
through silence and snow

4 comments:

Gwil W said...

phew! that took me about 10 edits!

Area 17 said...

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Well even Bashō edited a lot! ;-)

The alliteration of the first line is brilliant because you can literally hear that shovel.

Wonderful!

all my best,

Alan
The With Words Competition 2009

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diana l. said...

I heard it, too!

John McDonald said...

yes great one Gwilym
john