leading edge of steel
charcoal cloud roof marches in
closing off the sky
Wednesday, January 14, 2009
Posted by diana l. at 7:47 PM
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Winter Haiku 2008/2009
leading edge of steel
charcoal cloud roof marches in
closing off the sky
Posted by diana l. at 7:47 PM
4 comments:
Interesting imagery. Rogers Centre?
Thank you. I'm not exactly sure where Rogers Centre is located. This one could have arisen from any place where an expanse of sky is typically visible.
I'm wondering now if my choice of words may have been confusing...
No I like it a lot - the idea of a thick cloud-cover as making the sky smaller is something that I've noticed but never written about myself. This was very nice.
Thank you, Pat.
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