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Tuesday, February 3, 2009


this sweet morning
the world is freshly dusted
with powdered sugar

4 comments:

Vivian said...

I love the feel this leaves me with. May I make one suggestion?....perhaps add another adjective to the first line, which will give it 5 syllables. Something like....'this bright, sweet, morning" Just a thought.

I absolutely love...."the world is freshly dusted/
with powdered sugar"....how sweet indeed!

diana l. said...

Thank you, Vivian.

Möme said...

Having a sweet tooth, I really really love this one! Thank you for a sweeter morning!

diana l. said...

Thanks, Mome, and you're welcome. It's looked like powdered sugar to me since I was a little girl.