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Tuesday, December 9, 2008

frozen pond--
only moon glides across
its dark glass

3 comments:

Gwil W said...

I agree with john, but think you could get away with deleting 'only' and 'its'

Ashi said...

Nice poem, a very vivid picture of nature

Beatrice V said...

A haunting but gorgeous image, Nora.